New Poem..The Plead

sweetblueteen_3 · Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 1:43 am Post subject: New Poem..The Plead

The Plead

pass this time around
No one will ever know the difference
angry tears fall to the ground
take me up for my life and my existence

carry me all the way
spare me until your finished
my innocence has fallen from grace
all my self power diminished

You hold me for yourself
but I hold you to be insane
never trusted to be real
inside of sickening worthless pain

Trembling of lifeless threats
slitting at my throat
cut my wrists and watch me bleed
my life to me you owe

Hollow eyes looking at me
as if they wanted a piece
the screams of what you seek
in gods gift to replenish and release

never passing this time around
for I didn't have the chance
broken I've fallen to the ground
for I didn't take the last stance

fallen_angel · Regular Age: 19 Joined: 19 May 2006 Posts: 83

Wow, really. Great poem. I could feel that one. Good imagery, though I have no idea what you all have with cutting wrists. lol. Cheers. Please write more. ;p

sweetblueteen_3 · Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 6:34 am Post subject:

thanks, fallen_angel. lol. i wasn't all depressed i assure you, when i wrote the poem, i just..felt like saying it, because it definitely expresses what the speaker is feeling. ill try to write more*

georgia girl · Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 8:04 pm Post subject:

This is a good poem and I would also like to see mnore of your work! I agree with Fallen on the imagery... thats awsome! Keep up the good work and try not to go emo on us! lol j/k

sweetblueteen_3 · Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 8:06 pm Post subject:

I have more of my work on here..like Knowing me, and a couple other ones. If you would like to check them out:)

and i wouldnt go all emo..hehe Cool