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georgia girl
xXx Bite me..... I DARE you!!! xXx
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Location: Mammoth Cave, Ky

PostPosted: Fri Sep 05, 2008 6:10 pm    Post subject: Always Reply with quote

No matter the distance,
No matter the time,
I will stand beside him,
Even if he is no longer mine.

No matter the heartache,
No matter the pain,
I will always smile,
And I will always love him just the same.

Even though you belong to her,
My heart will remail with you,
Even if you say you don't love me,
I know for a matter of fact that you do.


Tell me what you think about it!
n.n;;
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Tamonten
Antagonistic cock.
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Age: 18
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Posts: 1497
Location: Your mouth

PostPosted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 7:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wowee; three stanzas. Someone's pushing the envelope.
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VinnyMusicMan
A Broken Man with a Broken Heart
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Age: 17
Joined: 13 Oct 2008
Posts: 2
Location: San Antonio

PostPosted: Mon Oct 13, 2008 3:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Really nice poem, I can relate quite well.

I've been in a situation that sounds similar to the one you describe for many years, it's only transfered, this time it's a bit better.
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sxy_butterfly
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Joined: 10 Jul 2006
Posts: 116
Location: Harlow, Essex, Uk

PostPosted: Wed Nov 26, 2008 7:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

cool peom
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alx
Only fools follow unconditionaly
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Age: 16
Joined: 05 Nov 2006
Posts: 3093
Location: Aufenthatt

PostPosted: Wed Nov 26, 2008 9:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

sxy_butterfly wrote:
cool peom


You got the 'o's the wrong way round in cool.
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Sonny Corleone
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Posts: 536
Location: Deep Within

PostPosted: Thu Nov 27, 2008 1:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

alx wrote:
sxy_butterfly wrote:
cool peom


You got the 'o's the wrong way round in cool.
Rofl.

Nice poem.
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M.O.G(Man Of God)
R.I.P.(Rest In Paradise)
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Age: 19
Joined: 25 Nov 2008
Posts: 19
Location: Mammoth Cave, KY

PostPosted: Mon Dec 01, 2008 8:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like it and i think i know who you are talking about but i'm not sure. Based on the end of the poem, i don't!!!!!!
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