Nightmares

georgia girl · Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2008 8:11 pm Post subject: Nightmares

Sleepsless nights,
Dreamless dreams,
Slient cries,
Soundless screams.

Terrfying people,
Killing me again and again,
I wake up screaming,
Will it ever end?

Teenage thoughts,
of blood and strife,
wishing if only,
I could take my own life.

Crying again,
At the bloody sight,
Of my broken body,
Dying in the night.

My blood covers the floor,
The puddle surrounds the body,
I can see the wounds,
As the blood seeps from with in me.

The nightmares never end,
They keep on comming,
Im scared again,
Of what my mind is becomming.

I havent written in a while so tell me what you think of it...
n.n;
Thanks!

sweetblueteen_3 · Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 8:08 pm Post subject:

wowwwwww...VERY imagery...I love it lol. you can really tell the struggle the person is going through. very good

georgia girl · Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 2:30 pm Post subject:

Thank you as I have stated I haven't written in a while. I'm glad that you like it.