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ababy9154
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 Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2007 12:46 am Post subject: ()nly s!xt33n |
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how can your feelings be so strong
your only sixteen
you must be wrong
but I know how I feel
and it's kiling me inside
and sometimes I wish
that I could just die...
i wrote this last year i am now 17...just to let people know! |
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fallen_angel
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| Not bad, but it is a somewhat small. Take your time, and simply write whatever comes to your mind. You'll get your flow eventually. I see potential. lol. Cheers. |
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