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Talisa
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 Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 10:44 pm Post subject: What I've Been Waiting For |
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this is an old poem that i wrte sum yrs back....
What ive been waiting for........
i dunno what to say, this just feels so surreal
I cant explain whats going on, it feels like a dream
do i deserve this? i cant really tell
ive never had something like this
a guy who treats me so well
looking at u, thinking of u
it feels so good, but so strange
before it was like happiness was outta my range
i never had someone who treats me so right
never felt so satisfied when i go to sleep at night
i look into those eyes of yours
thinkin that u might disappear
and then u reassure me that yure not going anywhere
a guy like u deserves better than me
then u reassure me that im all u need
why r u so good to me? why are things going so perfectly?
afraid to take ur words seriously
afraid cuz i think u might decide to leave me
but as long as ur here i'll let go of my doubt
cuz ur like an addiction, sumthing i cant live without
and as each day goes by i love u more and more
i cant help myself, ur just wat ive been waiting for... |
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runningscared19
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| Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 2:42 am Post subject: |
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| this is really good...it captures the emotion im feeling right now also...great job! |
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alx
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| Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 4:58 pm Post subject: |
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| I'd give it 5* but you have txt spelling so 4* |
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