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The Damage Is Done

 
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kitty
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PostPosted: Tue May 29, 2007 4:58 pm    Post subject: The Damage Is Done Reply with quote

i made this up on the spot;
not great but here you go:

the damage is done
theres nowhere to run
theres nowhere to hide
nothing left to decide
the damage is done
life is just withdawn
the beat of the heart is gone
the day is at it's end
nothing to change or mend
the damage is done
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Hopper17041993
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PostPosted: Wed May 30, 2007 8:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

quick, a little tooo repetitive but over all thumbs up hun.
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