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PostPosted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 12:58 pm    Post subject: rate this poem(4) xxxx Reply with quote

I wanna die
i wanna slit my wrists
its hard to keep on living
living is like a stab in the back
its like dream
you live you die
whats the point
life is a test
thats what they say
I'm not religious
is there a god i do not know
but i hate life
everyone resents me
everyone is so horrible
i live on the street
i have no were to go
my family dint care were i am
my friends
well i don't even have them
my love of my life
dropped me
cause he said i was a freak
i hate life
life is a mess
when i die i will be happy
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 2:14 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

See my last note about real life scenarios please? Xx
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 2:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

ok i shall
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 2:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

waw what you wrote is realy amazing
its sad but nice
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