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jinx
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Age: 19
Joined: 27 Sep 2007
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 Posted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 6:34 am Post subject: *That Day* |
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It was the first time we met,
but there was a feeling i didn't get.
i feel anxious when your around,
as f my heart lose it's ground.
being near you is a dream come true,
seeing someone else beside you is
a pain i must get through.
Still this heart of mine wishes,
that happiness will find my way. 
And hope loneliness won't here to stay.
Though my heart weeps with a smile.
i felt blessed i met someone like you
just for a little while.
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fallen_angel
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| This is great. Average length though. I want more. lol. Please never let go of that pen. Take your time, you've got potential. ;p |
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