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georgia girl
Another numb, emotionless night
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Age: 18
Joined: 16 May 2006
Posts: 151
Location: Mammoth Cave, Ky

PostPosted: Fri Sep 05, 2008 6:10 pm    Post subject: Always Reply with quote

No matter the distance,
No matter the time,
I will stand beside him,
Even if he is no longer mine.

No matter the heartache,
No matter the pain,
I will always smile,
And I will always love him just the same.

Even though you belong to her,
My heart will remail with you,
Even if you say you don't love me,
I know for a matter of fact that you do.


Tell me what you think about it!
n.n;;
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Tamonten
Antagonistic cock.
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Age: 18
Joined: 25 Oct 2006
Posts: 1483
Location: Your mouth

PostPosted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 7:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wowee; three stanzas. Someone's pushing the envelope.
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VinnyMusicMan
A Broken Man with a Broken Heart
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Age: 17
Joined: 13 Oct 2008
Posts: 2
Location: San Antonio

PostPosted: Mon Oct 13, 2008 3:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Really nice poem, I can relate quite well.

I've been in a situation that sounds similar to the one you describe for many years, it's only transfered, this time it's a bit better.
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