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georgia girl
Another numb, emotionless night
Age: 18
Joined: 16 May 2006
Posts: 151
Location: Mammoth Cave, Ky
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 Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2008 8:11 pm Post subject: Nightmares |
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Sleepsless nights,
Dreamless dreams,
Slient cries,
Soundless screams.
Terrfying people,
Killing me again and again,
I wake up screaming,
Will it ever end?
Teenage thoughts,
of blood and strife,
wishing if only,
I could take my own life.
Crying again,
At the bloody sight,
Of my broken body,
Dying in the night.
My blood covers the floor,
The puddle surrounds the body,
I can see the wounds,
As the blood seeps from with in me.
The nightmares never end,
They keep on comming,
Im scared again,
Of what my mind is becomming.
I havent written in a while so tell me what you think of it...
n.n;
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sweetblueteen_3
~*~The dreamer ~*~
Age: 17
Joined: 11 May 2006
Posts: 143
Location: Saskatchewan, Canada
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| Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 8:08 pm Post subject: |
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| wowwwwww...VERY imagery...I love it lol. you can really tell the struggle the person is going through. very good |
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georgia girl
Another numb, emotionless night
Age: 18
Joined: 16 May 2006
Posts: 151
Location: Mammoth Cave, Ky
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| Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 2:30 pm Post subject: |
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| Thank you as I have stated I haven't written in a while. I'm glad that you like it. |
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