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i can't shake this feeling.....

 
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ababy9154
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 23, 2007 12:43 am    Post subject: i can't shake this feeling..... Reply with quote

It's amazing how someone can change your life and not even realize they are doing it. How can they just show up, change who you are and walk away without a care in the world? I tell him " I am madly in love with you", did I scare him? Why did you blow it all away? I loved you! My heart was open, my tears are seeping through. All the pain deep inside, I wonder if it was worth my time. If you cried like I cried, your inside would slowly die. I hear that song playing in my ear. It reminds me of when you were near. Is she treating you the way you deserve to be treated. Is the love being provided from her the way it could have been from me. No matter what she'll never love you the way I do because me love is so deep only I can see. When she left you, you come crawling back to me. I told you I'm over you when I know that's not true. Expectualy when I see your smiling face and those baby blues. When I have to say my final goodbye, I only get weaker as time goes by. How could you return on my final goodbye. When I think its over all you do is make me cry. I say I love you, you say you love her. My heart shattered like glass. You need to disappear. My love for you is still here. I just buried deep inside me, so that no one can see all the pain and suffering I go through everyday just thinking of you. [/size]
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fallen_angel
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PostPosted: Thu May 22, 2008 5:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Cant take the time to read. But if you cold only arrange that in paragraphs or even make a poem out of it, that would be great.
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