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trackrunner45
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 5:05 pm    Post subject: We are Reply with quote

We are the blind
We are the lost
For the way in which,
We can not find

We are the uncertain
We are the skeptical
For what we can't see, we don't believe
That of, what's behind the closed curtain.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 5:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like it.
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 9:10 pm    Post subject: woot Reply with quote

really good...sort of eerie...in what way?...i don't know...just is.
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 22, 2007 2:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Mystery.. Fear of the unknown.. Nicely wrapped up.. Thanks for sharing..
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 4:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

have i heard something like that before?
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