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Talisa
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 Posted: Thu May 24, 2007 2:28 am Post subject: When Night Falls |
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this is just a little sumthing i wrote one night as i was thinkin about my guy friend who i happen to be crazy about....in the words of Britney Spears, "i cant help the way i feel" lol
When Night Falls
When night falls i'm crying myself to sleep
wishing you were next to me here beneath the sheets
i cant help it that i'm crying, i just want you that bad
and i cant seem to get through to you
thats what makes me so sad
it may sound crazy, yes
but its just how i feel
what im feeling for u is forever, what i'm feeling is real
When night falls and i'm lying here wondering where u are
wondering if youre near to me, wondering if youre far
Maybe if u were close
i could imagine u close to me
Here with me, next to me...
But thats another story
if youre far
can i come far away with you?
could we run away together so i could be alone with u?
i'm wishing for all these things
and hoping i get a chance with u
a chance to show u all of me, a chance to love u
When night falls
and i'm sick of crying over u
i just close my eyes and dream of ui close my eyes and dream of us
i dream of your love and i dream of your touch
i dream of the day when we get close together
the day when i become yours forever
but then i open my eyes and i know youre not here
and i cry myself to sleep again
drowning the bed with my tears... |
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krzykool182
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| Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 4:06 am Post subject: what? |
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| OMFG!best poem i've heard...seriously that's CRAZY good...i <3 your poem.PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write some more. |
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kitty
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| Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 11:32 am Post subject: |
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| i love your poem :] |
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Talisa
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| Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 1:42 pm Post subject: |
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| lol thnx....kitty i'll probly put sum more stuff up l8r |
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Hopper17041993
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| Posted: Wed May 30, 2007 8:29 pm Post subject: |
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| Honey, really, thats quite deep! I know how you feeling, you tried telling him all his?(not all the crying and everything but have you told him you like him "THIS" much?) |
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Talisa
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| Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 10:24 pm Post subject: |
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| Hopper17041993 wrote: | | Honey, really, thats quite deep! I know how you feeling, you tried telling him all his?(not all the crying and everything but have you told him you like him "THIS" much?) |
well hopper.........actually no i havent...i duno if i shud! cuz the guy n i we're gud friends but im not sure if he wants more (damn all those crazy mixd signals he sends me!)...so 4 now i just keep it 2 myself.....*sigh* |
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alx
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| Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 4:56 pm Post subject: |
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No, give it a go.
Trust me, one of the biggist killers of posible relationships is girls expecting guys to make the first move, |
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Talisa
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| Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 1:21 am Post subject: |
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| hmm.....i reaaalllyy dunno...i dont wanna risk anything n i dont wanna make things awkward w/him n i |
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alx
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| Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 7:18 pm Post subject: |
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You can't expect people to take risks on you if you never take any risks yourself.
And if you don't take a gamble once in a while your not living, your just being. |
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godgy-podga
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| Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 5:11 am Post subject: |
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| if u dont take a risk, ull spend ur whole life wondering "what if?"... and if u really are good friends, he wont let anything wreck the friendship |
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godgy-podga
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| Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 11:05 am Post subject: |
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| godgy-podga wrote: | | if u dont take a risk, ull spend ur whole life wondering "what if?"... and if u really are good friends, he wont let anything wreck the friendship |
hmm.. i should start taking my own advice... lol |
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Hopper17041993
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| Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 5:47 pm Post subject: |
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| alx wrote: | No, give it a go.
Trust me, one of the biggist killers of posible relationships is girls expecting guys to make the first move, |
Now if someone had told me that I wouldn't be in my current predicament!........sods bloody law... |
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Talisa
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| Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 2:01 am Post subject: |
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| u guuuys...i really dont kno if i shud...part of me wants to and is listening to wat yall r sayin...n part of me is like, dont do ittt |
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alx
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| Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 9:41 am Post subject: |
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Trust us, advice is like our online job.
We'd ask for double pay but we'd still get the same amount of money. |
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Hopper17041993
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| Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 6:20 pm Post subject: |
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| ditto |
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