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rachiegrace Regular

Age: 18 Joined: 18 May 2006 Posts: 109
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 12:00 am Post subject: *-The Road Of Life-* |
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If I could go back what would I do,
how could I make you say I still love you.
I would do anything to have made you stay.
I wish life was like a fairy tail,
with a happy ending to every day.
But life is like a road with bumps, curves, and cracks,
where you can't go forward while your looking back.
It has it's detours and heavy loads,
and sooner or later it will get old.
But if i could go back i'd change my path.
I'd close my eyes,
i'd stay true,
and pray that road leads straight to you.
--tell me what you think...*~ |
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minnie101 Regular

Age: 17 Joined: 06 Feb 2007 Posts: 98 Location: new orleans da real chocolate city
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 9:43 pm Post subject: |
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| girl i really like this poem this is something like what me and my b/f are going threw right now cause we just broke up last night |
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rachiegrace Regular

Age: 18 Joined: 18 May 2006 Posts: 109
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 4:56 am Post subject: |
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im glad u liked it...awe im sorry i hope everythings going better now... |
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alx Wanker

Age: 16 Joined: 05 Nov 2006 Posts: 3301
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 7:09 pm Post subject: |
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| Its good. |
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