Nervous

bearwithme · Posted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 11:01 pm Post subject: Nervous

Hey, this is my first post on here so try not to be too mean, ok? But yea, this is a poem that i wrote awhile ago about a situation i was placed in. I wanna know what you guyz think. Smile

Be honest.. But not too mean.

My heart is jumpin'
Blood pumpin'
Nerves overpower my mind.
What do i say?
What do I do?
What have i gotten myself into?
Pressure shakin my bones
Me and you alone?
Away from all the madness.
No escape.
Do I go or do I stay?
Too many questions runnin thru my mind.
If only i could take back time.
Sit back and rewind.
Remind me why I said ok.
Take me back to yesterday,
Or what it the day before?
I don't know anymore.
My mind is going awry
Spinning, running overtime.
Because everytime I see you
I try to resist.
But then you touch me
And everything becomes and mist
Of confusion and heartache.
Because in you there's risk
That i want to take.
But can you wait for me?..
And that is just my point you see?
Me for you or you for me?
Reality or fantasy?
Reality. Or fantasy.
It's usually the same for me.
Building hopes and sinking dreams.
This is my reality.
Because I'm for you,
Are you for me?
Or is this just a fantasy?

sweetblueteen_3 · Posted: Tue Jul 25, 2006 5:40 am Post subject:

hey..i think thats pretty awesome! i liked how you used the words to describe the way you were feeling...it was cool

keep writing!!! Very Happy

Haliegh · Posted: Fri Jul 28, 2006 9:06 pm Post subject:

i think its good. it real. ppl feel that way all the time and it's a hard thing to express in a poem and you did a really good job!! when i read it i know just how you feel. and i like that about your poem!! no holding back!!