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do you think my poem is good?
its ok
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ya its amazing
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umm, do i really have to say?
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 12, 2006 3:43 pm    Post subject: untitled Reply with quote

i love you i love you
that is all i want that is all i need
to be held, to be kissed
i crave it, i desire it
to be caressed, to be loved
lust and love
mingling to the point of unknowing
that is all i want that is all i need
to hold and to kiss
to be craved to be desired
to caress and to love
that is all i want that is all i need
i love you i love you
~Kyla~
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 13, 2006 3:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

its ok
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PostPosted: Wed May 10, 2006 4:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

thats dumb
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PostPosted: Wed May 10, 2006 4:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

thats dumb
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PostPosted: Thu May 11, 2006 5:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

screw u! Evil or Very Mad
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PostPosted: Thu May 18, 2006 5:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i like it.
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